Finding Old Words
| I have a predilection for finding | |
| four leaf clovers and old souls- | |
| ghosts of a simpler world, winding | |
| through catwalk concrete wholes. | |
| Four leaf clovers and old souls | |
| sing crowling carnival chords | |
| through catwalk concrete wholes, | |
| beyond gypsy painted boards. | |
| "Sing crowling carnival chords | |
| with us," the dancers beckon. | |
| And beyond gypsy painted boards | |
| they disappear in dervish seconds. | |
| "...with us." The dancers' beckons | |
| echo on canvas flapping in the air | |
| then disappear in dervish seconds. | |
| In their old world I'd have despaired. | |
| Echoes on canvas flapping in the air, | |
| they're ghosts of a simpler world, winding. | |
| In that old world I'd have despaired. | |
| But I have a predilection for finding. | 
 
 
 
1 comment:
This pantoum actually rhymes - a great feat, and a lot harder than it looks! You don't have to rhyme, however; pantoums have loosened up quite a bit. I'm always happy if I can just get it to make some kind of sense.
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