Finding Old Words
I have a predilection for finding | |
four leaf clovers and old souls- | |
ghosts of a simpler world, winding | |
through catwalk concrete wholes. | |
Four leaf clovers and old souls | |
sing crowling carnival chords | |
through catwalk concrete wholes, | |
beyond gypsy painted boards. | |
"Sing crowling carnival chords | |
with us," the dancers beckon. | |
And beyond gypsy painted boards | |
they disappear in dervish seconds. | |
"...with us." The dancers' beckons | |
echo on canvas flapping in the air | |
then disappear in dervish seconds. | |
In their old world I'd have despaired. | |
Echoes on canvas flapping in the air, | |
they're ghosts of a simpler world, winding. | |
In that old world I'd have despaired. | |
But I have a predilection for finding. |
1 comment:
This pantoum actually rhymes - a great feat, and a lot harder than it looks! You don't have to rhyme, however; pantoums have loosened up quite a bit. I'm always happy if I can just get it to make some kind of sense.
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